Wednesday, October 8, 2008
Tattoo
This is how I know you:
five minutes on a public bus.
You gripped the rail beside me;
just a hand beside my hand.
Across the swollen foothills
of your arthritic knuckles,
thin, white, weaving riverbeds
traced the dry terrain.
In faded ink, an anchor
lay within the hammock
slung from thumb to fingers,
its blurry, blue-black outline
softened to a fog.
I would not know your face again,
but I would know your hand –
that worn and weak insignia
so crisply drawn upon my mind.
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3 comments:
that is a super cool image. somehow, i think that the first stanza is a bit heavy handed-- since you mentioned that you wanted some feedback. after that, though, i think it is golden, anne. very nice. i love the idea that a tattoo becomes "foggy" as it ages. very maritime.
This is a marvelous poem! I love the last stanza most of all.
I am new to your blog. I have enjoyed exploring your posts again and I will be back.
I love this poem. It creates such am image for me that I feel there with you. I traveled on many buses as a child so this personal past experience coupled with your image is powerful. Thanks.
Linda
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